This is My Fight Nice, I can see what you were going for!
First, just wanted to say thank you for reviewing my music, made my day to see something constructive. :3
I like the things added onto eachother one after the other, it's a great effect. At first, it sounds more experimental, but goes into something composed well. I especially like the part at 2:20 where it builds up again.
Only qualm I have are are some of the sounds don't fit in as well as others would, perhaps something smoother coming in at some point? A lot of it stands out, which is fine, although adding some more unique sounds that layer over eachother in the first minute may be more pleasing to the ear.
But you, too, have talent. I would've never thought to add some of those...rifts? That layer over eacher. (Sorry, I don't know fancy music terms. xD )