Lurv it <3
Very nice, very gritty, and I love the view you had of link when you made this. It's great watercoloring and attention to detail: I noticed the crisscross of the mesh under the shirt, the sword details, stiching, etc. It's all great :3
But still I have to agree that while yes, navi does look gritty, she's also the wrong hue =[
It's not so much that she needs to glow, but she looks kinda green/grey >.< Not exactly her shade of blue =/
But out of everything I really do think this is a great piece, and I look forward to more of your work :3 Cheers!