That was a very nice touch at the end. It was paced nicely and the visuals were spot on. While the concept of robots seeking freedom is done to death, this one feels different and more satisfying, somehow.
This was well animated and was interesting to watch, but...INFORMATION OVERLOAD! WAY too much info at once. Try spreading out the details more. You tried so hard with the visuals, and you succeeded with them for the most part, but it's almost impossible to make such a humongous wall of text like that interesting when it's all shoved into the intro like that.
True. But a humble freelancer gotta follow the script. :)
Me while watching this:
"Ugh this is so stupid, it's just like -Pffahahha- all those other paradies with.. -hehehehe- stupid dick jokes and overly dramati- HAHAHA- low rate humor- HAHAHA I'm so sick of this lazy sort of joke writing and...HAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Oh you know what screw it I'm laughing my ass off have a 5."
I'm immediately going to show this to as many people as I possibly can. Amazing work! A full, uplifting story.
I quite liked this. It had its weird, scary moments, but in the end it left me feeling happier. The quality of writing was pretty good, and it feels refreshing to see something like this on newgrounds.
I hope you keep this kind of quality work up. :)
Once again, a good episode. Had a fun ending to it and the characters are developing nicely. :]
However, I have one issue with the whole series. Where the crap are the admins and such? :L
Too much low brow humor. Which is stupid to say about newgrounds, but only two 1 seconds jokes really impressed me about this. (The dick punch and floating sideways near the wall thing.)
The rest was just disgust humor. And I've seen disgust humor so much that it's boring to me.
At the same I did watch it all the way through, and the actual flash animation is fine. =]
Just next time, I'd like to see more jokes that don't rely on sex and violence. It's fine to have that in flash, obviously, but...a few more clean jokes would've gone a long way here.
It might just be my headhpones, but it'd have been a better if the voices werea bit louder compared to the music.
Still, this'll be caught in my head for the next month. Good job!
Decent animation, but the storytelling seemed rushed. I couldn't really understand what was going on, but...maybe that's because the music was too loud compared to the audio.
I had to strain to hear what was happening, so you should really work on balancing.
On the flip side, it was pretty to look at and seems like it has a lot of potential. The voice acting, while not SUPER amazing, was fairly decent for a pet project too. :)
Keep up the good work.
I didn't understand it but I found it amusing and kind of funny anyway.
Good job C:
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